Two boys once made s'mores by a fire in that farmhouse. Now one sings their song while the other watches the screen flash white. You won't forget the ending.
I feel for Wyatt, but someone had to do something before Richard could end the planet in a holocaust. Also, I lived in Denver when the Flobots broke out. I'll never forget hearing Handlebars in late 2007 in a local battle of the bands contest from the alternative station. One minute in, I was fucking hooked. Yeah, they won that contest.
Woah. The story lures you in, and I was thinking it would be more of a laid back reflection. Then it punched me in the balls. You know how to pivot a story brilliantly.
I feel for Wyatt, but someone had to do something before Richard could end the planet in a holocaust. Also, I lived in Denver when the Flobots broke out. I'll never forget hearing Handlebars in late 2007 in a local battle of the bands contest from the alternative station. One minute in, I was fucking hooked. Yeah, they won that contest.
Great story, and I loved how it turns and catches you. Really nicely written.
Thanks, :) Glad you enjoyed it!
Woah. The story lures you in, and I was thinking it would be more of a laid back reflection. Then it punched me in the balls. You know how to pivot a story brilliantly.
Thanks Eric! Had a lot of similar feedback about it actually. Bit surprising :3
Woooah. This was crazy.
In a good or bad way 😳
Goood!!!
Omg ty 😅 might have been a ball of anxiety about going too hard about it.
Omg i am speechless, and crying.
😭 Sorry
Never apologize. As others can tell you, I cry a lot when I read.
OK. Thank you was checking in.